Revised Comps
THINGS THAT WORK
- Good image selection (fits brand)
- Menu is simple and legible
- Cool imagery
- Nice and subtle color palette
- Clean design
- Background image was a good choice
- Logo is looking good
- Heavy/bold/confident outlines are strong visual organizers
- Great type choices
- Black is a strong contrast to neutral color palette
THINGS THAT DON'T WORK
- Make logo smaller for more breathing room
- Put images in menu
- Logo pulls too much attention
- Web buttons too far apart
- Tablet buttons too small
- Add more content to homepage
- Implement heavy outlines on splash page – maybe on buttons?
- Increase scale of typography on mobile
- Splash page doesn't guide user to scroll down
- Change/edit hamburger menu (too big)
- Use subtle horizontal imagery on the menu