THINGS THAT WORK

1. The color palette in #1.
2. The images used in #1.
3. The lightly textured background used in #1.
4. The title font (Archer) on #1.
5. The font choices work in #2.

THINGS THAT DON'T WORK

1. The purely black and white color palette on #2.
2. The buttons on #1 would look better with color.
3. The coffee icon on #2 clashes with the logo.
4. The layout on #2 doesn't say "sit down cafe with food."
5. The use of a serif typeface on a website may make the text hard to read.